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Last Call

The last-call lights flickered once more A warning sign she chose to ignore Her soul, just like her pocketbook Was as empty as inside the glass she looked The bartender said, “Lass, you now must leave” As she wiped her tears on a tattered sleeve With no place left in the world to go She ventured out in the freshly fallen snow The beauty that she once wore with pride Had long ago shriveled up and died inside Her vanity had taken its high priced toll Leaving behind a lost and lonely soul Girls who were much less popular than she Now bask in a love life of prosperity While she is a smile in many a lad’s past The less frivolous girls have had the last laugh Now her love is something she can’t give away None of the men she devoured elected to stay That pint she just drained with her last sip Is the only thing left willing to touch her lips Her lights flickered their own last call As she ached for some more alcohol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:42:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:50:00 AM
Pitifully sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:22:00 AM
Way to go Joe. Well done.
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Date: 4/16/2012 8:58:00 AM
Oh Joe - you are on a roll. This one is full of heartache; makes my soul cry. There is not enough booze can fill this emptiness. well done. Kathy
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Date: 4/15/2012 3:38:00 PM
a sad tale, but very well-rhymed. nice one!
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Date: 4/14/2012 10:59:00 PM
I agree with the powerful delivery mentioned by Deborah!! You had me captivated from the beginning, I didn't want it to end.. Good work Joe!!..:JP]
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Date: 4/14/2012 10:55:00 PM
Wow! such power in your delivery...you've spun a sad tale Joe... best wishes in the contest!! big hugs,love deb-- Well Done!
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