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Last Call


                                        last call made —
                                        winter moonlight
                                        on an empty bottle



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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:35:00 PM
    You chose very well your personal favorite, Ruben. Congrats to you. How are you?

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:25:00 AM
    one of my favorite on this list of winners!! the mood is amazing!!! (I would place high!!)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:35:00 AM
    Hi congratulations, great haiku Ex, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:27:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Ruben ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:47:00 PM
    Ruben, I just realized that your name is on the third winner, so sorry for the late congrats, your haiku is really wonderful, I love the simplicity, once again, congrats Ruben! - Hug, Yanny :D

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 11:06:00 AM
    congrats on your win Ruben

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:46:00 PM
    I see from below that I saw this several times. It's so cool to resurrect these oldies because we forget so quickly what we read here. Big congrats, Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Ruben:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:58:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win, Ruben! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Good haiku Ruben!...I can picture the scene...congrats on the win - Tim

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 5:44:00 AM
    CONGRATULATIONS on your win!

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 1:24:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:36:00 PM
    good haiku' Nate

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 5:08:00 PM
    !!!!!I love it!! I'm glad it won! Well Done, gifted you are...bighugggss,love~deb

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 7:39:00 PM
    congrats on your win! he is a tough judge!

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Congrats Ruben on your superb win with this fine piece of haiku... nice weekend!!

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 10:00:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful 1st place win, Ruben! Love, Kim