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Last breath

Given two hands,
Yet those hands will never hold anything.
Given two eyes,
Yet those eyes can see nothing.
Given one heart,
Yet that heart has never known joy.

Befriended by no one,
Nor loved by anyone.
Granted nothing,
Nor possessing anything.
And so I pray for. . .
My last breath.

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:25:00 PM
    Be-you-tiful <3

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem An. Great write. Sad.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Great write I can relate

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. I appreciated your effort, as demonstrated in this posting. Keep writing and we will keep reading.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:43:00 PM
    Very sad..I wish you better days. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Poignant write this! Brings out sad emotions of a life lived out in loneliness. You've brought out the theme nicely.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:28:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today An. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:35:00 PM
    Welcome to the soup. So very sorry its under sad writing but here you can bloom as a poet and we can help with anything you don't know about. I urge you to enter this in a contest. You might be happy with the results. ~J

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Woha! This is quite sad? Jeepers! I'll be your friend... :o) Very nice sad write...