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Land of the Lost

Land of the Lost Time in time out What's it all about Got no freedom Drunk on rum Russian roulette full of fun Empty barrel, trigger gun Bust a cop Prison mob Modern warfare Lord's prayer Life's a steal Keep it real Living will patients bill File for divorce Marriage course False image True discourage Hating phase Finger peace trace Murder case Birthplace Where's my justice Religion practice Body full of lies the truth dies Overdrive Sex thrive Driver licenses Fatal expense Public enemy Hermit disease Auspice unity Combined greedy Foot prints Heart dent Failure to communicate Achieve to hallucinate Judged by hypocrite 3 seconds, 3000 kilobits Every minute matters For jugglers and gamblers Every life has a cost Land of the lost By: P.D...

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:27:00 PM

so lost **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:24:00 AM

PD thanks for the recent contest wins. I love seeing my old stuff get shown again.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/29/2013 4:17:00 PM

love it Linda,,, title reminded me of the series Land of The Lost,,, yours is way better ;} thanks for liking my Soul Sucker " ;}

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/29/2013 9:11:00 PM

Hi Dark One, The monkey sent the monkey, you know, the one you have on a stick, erm me. I hope your starting to feel better, though I know you still have more to come, time will heal. This is a very interesting work, I particularly like "Where's my justice", how often do we ask that question. I'll leave you for now. Do take care of yourself and yours. Regards Richard

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/26/2013 4:58:00 PM

Hi PD love your couplets,,,

Michelle Degironemo

Date: 6/1/2011 6:08:00 AM

NICE!!! Who is you by the way???

Jack Horne

Date: 5/21/2011 11:02:00 AM

Clever, thought provoking couplets, PD.

Amy Sullivan

Date: 10/29/2010 6:25:00 AM

This one is really super! Rings truth throughout! Amzie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2010 9:16:00 AM

hi pd :)-- how are you? i read your comments in my latest post-- yup it's just a poem but took bits and pieces from somewhere--thanks--I guess the rain brought some inspiration with it-- that was an older poem that I've been working on for the past month though & finished it for Frank's contest...enjoy your day now-- :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/24/2010 8:18:00 AM

Enjoyed the read. God Bless Phyl

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/23/2010 1:33:00 PM

Almost like a "rap" poem. Intresting! Have you tried moontown cafe or Soul Fountain yet? Love Matthew Anish

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/12/2010 4:43:00 PM

Very cool write , love your style. The meaning to "washed away". Is a cleansing poem or some old demons. Love your interest hun. Have great evening love. Always Michael

Doreen Cyr

Date: 9/11/2010 7:28:00 PM

Very thought provoking write for life is contradictory and sometimes confusing. very well written thank you also for your comments doreen

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/10/2010 10:56:00 PM

skat beat me to it,,nothing like the movie,,but all kidding aside now, a beautiful and sincerely enriching piece, I enjoyed your thoughts and message,,and Thank you for all your visits and for taking the time to leave your special words behind upon mine,,Blessings..Cecil

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/10/2010 7:07:00 PM

Quite interesting Couplet, PD. You are good at those and point out quite well contradictions. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Skat A

Date: 9/10/2010 5:45:00 PM

NoTHING LIKE THE MOVIE*luv~SKAT

Lisa Cooper

Date: 9/10/2010 3:08:00 PM

nice pen

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/10/2010 3:11:00 AM

Wow, P.D., that's Soup Mail!!! Great selection of words!...Thank you for your comments and have a great weekend!...Gert

. Dabomb™

Date: 9/9/2010 5:25:00 PM

great rhyming! thanks for your nice comments, alway much appreciated! ;)

Rick Parise

Date: 9/9/2010 4:00:00 PM

Truly a great write of many pondered and true thoughts~Enjoyed~I don't always get around to leave comments , I do appreciate your comments, and I thank you!!!I Enjoy your work~Thank you and God bless~your friend Rick

Jan Harvey

Date: 9/9/2010 3:01:00 PM

Many views to consider, as here a firm step to enlightnement maybe."time in time out what's it all about?... clear and most assuredly will finds one's way. Thanks. Jan

David Smalling

Date: 9/9/2010 2:19:00 PM

A real city slicker fave, it is not light the content that you write on, though. A very good show, friend

Carol Fillmore

Date: 9/9/2010 5:31:00 AM

this is great! indeed this describes a land of the lost...sounds like rap (not that I have a great knowledge of that:) thanks for your comment on my recent post, and pleased to hear you enjoyed it:) am very appreciative!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 6:48:00 PM

P.D. this has some interesting images and contrasts going on. My favorite couplets were the first one and the last one. So what made you think of all these things? Was it for Nathan down here who says. "this is so not about me?" hahaha. Oh, I also loved that one, LIving will , patient's bill. I totally relate to that one! LUv, Andrea

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/8/2010 6:31:00 PM

"Time in time out" The land of the lost, would that be prison? Taking into account the hectic mechanical movement of a working society, those who fall out of pace fall out of place. In a way, the slackers end up in the land of the lost. Going in and out of jail and being a menace to his society. Maybe I'm just getting to deep, lol. Nice write.