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Lament of My Life

Lament of my life. Destined life i lived but unfulfilled, Much had to do,my tears spilled, Down in white ,peaceful my body lies Happy to meet God, invisible,my soul flies, Earth,a stage,different roles to play on, Multiple opportunities,life was a unique platform, In responsibilities ,i was good enough, To balance ,right wrong was indeed tough, No regrets for family,money and claims, Bad luck,unstable life my illness to blame, To beat it, i was in armature , my second aim, Hope for fellow sufferers,the damn disease i'll tame, Like a bolt from the blue,unexpectedly it struck, Trapped in the whirlpool,my mental energy to suck, Family and friendship bonds anchored for support, Still,for what reason, my forte got more to thwart? Much for good,i would have given to the world, A life of normalcy,a gift,if i had unfurled, Alas! I could not explore galore, My potential in the dark void did allure, Missed the epic moment when i could be more than me, My purpose in life would have got a meaning to be, At the edge of life i did meet poetry soup, Rare of a place,solely an encouraging,friendly group, In dust,my body is unmoving, not frail,peaceful,it has no pains, But on earth,personal vacuum haunts and fighting spirit remains. Contest:Lament of my life. Sponsor:Casarah Nance. 17 March 2016

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Date: 3/22/2016 12:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this soul-searching lament of your llfe! Thank you for sharing it.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/23/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you.....best wishes
Date: 3/21/2016 4:27:00 PM
Hi Rizwana, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A wonderful lament. A seven and a fave my friend....Vlad.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/23/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your uplifting comments....regards
Date: 3/21/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thnk you Laura.....regards.....and a big congrats to you too
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:48:00 AM
Rizwana, congrats on your placement in the contest-luloo
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:40:00 PM
Deep and moving, Rizwana. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Sandra.....regards
Date: 3/20/2016 8:34:00 PM
I am normally picky about capitalization and punctuation, but the thoughts, the who you are filled this piece so perfectly that I had to place it. Thank you for such great entry and grats on 5th place
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/21/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Casarah.....your greetings are a toast to all fighter poets in PS.....more than placement, the fact that we get a chance to rectify our mistakes...and that too with so much respect .....it gives a sense of achievement... The battle is still on..... Regards

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