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Lament of My Life

Nothing but a dream I tell myself but sadly it's all real my life has ripped my heart and would not let it seam for it ripped open every time I glanced into the past So I try not to look back. But the past made me who I am. So how can I ignore what made me? I look around and just want to break free. But I'm trapped, I can see piles of brain dead people walking around me, following a bell as if it was a deity. Not asking why cause it's normal. They don't know anything different. I once had a dream where I was free and know I know I am not free. Why do I stay here? my dad? my future? No it has to be fear that keeps me here. Stuck with people I don't like and people that will never understand me. Fear pulls me back like earth's gravity unable to get off the ground but fear that I will become nothing and that I will not make a sound on this ever moving world. I want to make my mark, cause thats all we want. I want to be heard over the 6 billion people on this world. This is the first poem I made it jumps around but still one of my favorites.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 5:15:00 PM

Brennan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Brennan Gunster
Date: 4/15/2016 7:06:00 AM

I don't have poetic skills. Just a hobby. Sorry for responding late haven't had much time with school and trying to write more poetry but I do love everyone that post a comment. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:23:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Brennan :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brennan Gunster
Date: 3/14/2016 12:24:00 PM

thank you

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:32:00 AM

Brennan Gunster, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Brennan Gunster
Date: 3/14/2016 11:35:00 AM

Hi im only 16 but ive been writing my poems for about 2 years in a little orange book. I thought to put them on here today. Although I might not ben the best poet I hope to try it out and hopefully become recognized for it. English is not my best subject so pls pardon the grammar mistakes in my poem. thank you for comenting