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Lake-View

I gaze aimlessly  through my reflection in the window at a shameless body of blackness Motionless, it breathes as my tears crash against the rocky moon glisten falling into the city view Glistening lights dance  in the heavens above me, to the rhythm of blowing winds while trees stand alone and their branches sway Encircled by high-rise and highway surrounded by life's ever changing melody, it flows it flows endlessly into the arms of my dark horizon Lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/10/2011 5:18:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:10:00 AM
a deep piece here Lay, i shall come back to it again! also i have sent you soup mail!
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Date: 4/5/2011 7:22:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your exceptional poetry Lay. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:33:00 AM
beautiful expression, nice images, shameless body of blackness...life's ever changing melody... walayee
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:27:00 AM
Simply beautiful Lay with splendid imagery unfolding in every line and verse luv.. spectacular view presented .. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:25:00 AM
Amazing descriptions of a a city view and a view into the heart as well...love,Deb
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:58:00 PM
You write with a true passion Lay, this is truly wonderful. Harry
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