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After Frido Kahlo’s Roots
Others think my hair wild, untamed, needing a coif when all about me the wind rustles through the fallen leaves… red on gold, stamped brown, ethereal... substance once there, gone like soup cooked for hours to fight the chill, tang of parsnip… that’s the visible crop, bushy froth while beneath soil, fight the war for a strand or lock or two of my being... heart untied from children hands freed to tap or zizzle a bow across strings what a jumble it all is after the clean prepped pampered soul is emptied scraped down to metal my hair unwound into myself swelling as if a clogged pore and I’m wondering... is there is any who know how I look undressed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/31/2014 11:26:00 PM
A delicate and wonderful piece. Very nicely done!
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Date: 2/22/2014 11:30:00 PM
The wild abandon of your line structure marries beautifully with the theme of this piece. A wonderfully extended metaphor. I enjoyed this a lot.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/1/2014 7:22:00 PM
Thanks much Gary!
Date: 11/7/2013 12:26:00 PM
Sheri, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:30:00 AM
This is cool...The format really fits the subject. BG soup mail
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:38:00 PM
Oh wow......I am so glad I tapped into your poetry...this format, simply adds to the free-verse style, and clever use of your message.......self introspection is a difficult thing to admit. I will have to see more of your poems. And ps......thanks very much for the HM in your contest! :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 10:38:00 AM
This was so well done both the message and the disjointed visual approach. I like it a lot. Thanks for listing my poem amongst the winners in your contest.
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Date: 10/18/2013 7:08:00 AM
aww stop making fun of yourself! you know I do it all the time too, but we're just trying to make a pre-emptive strike so others will back off, you know what it doesn't help BIG hugs, sorry I didn't list personification as the form in the contest, IT WAS personification I thought that was enough? XXXOOO
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:51:00 AM
Interesting work..Thanks for the notice of my work..My poem written in Poulter's Measure was about a Rooster which is in the poultry family..You know a male chicken..I don't know if you know about Poulter's measure or not..It is in the online enclycopedia..Thanks again...Sara
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:36:00 AM
What a marvel,love your grand style and deep meaning. Thanks for appreciating my poem,thought to personify giving life to it-i.e attributing life to it and addressing it as human. Am honored for your noble visit. I.B.E
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:08:00 PM
this is deep and sincere poetry. Very cool format. I am interested in knowing if you are British or American or another nationality. I have a poem in your contest and someone told me the word was misspelled, but it's correct by american standards!!
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:20:00 PM
Very interesting poem. I honestly enjoyed reading this well written work. You really added near perfection with the last line.... Go girl...Jake
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