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Inspired by the Fall. 

 

Lady Autumn lies - discarded now. Left alone - her stick- like bones are lying under trees where they have blown. Fiery colors of her verdant dresses lie in brown heaped on icy, frosted ground. Sparkling gossamer that held her hair in leafy wreathes unraveled by the bitter winds- almost as if saying she can never dance again. But promises of spring, in tight buds, appear on dried twigs, blowing winds whisper secrets of summer’s emerald green stirring within a stone-cold kingdom's dormant majesty. As Winter makes his stormy presence near, her blithe light finally overcome- she looks to fading crimson skies And feels her spirit rise. Suzanne Delaney ~1st Place~ Contest: Standard Contest No. 120 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 10/02/2018

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Date: 2/3/2021 7:40:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Suzanne. Glad to have found your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 8/4/2019 5:51:00 PM
Beautiful write Suzanne sad but hopeful.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/4/2019 7:15:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting. James; Most appreciated. SuZ
Date: 10/3/2018 6:52:00 PM
Beautiful imagery with this superb personification, Suzanne. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this seasonal poem, SuZ, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 10/2/2018 6:27:00 PM
The promise of another season is blowing in the wind..Congrats on your win Suzanne
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2018 6:49:00 AM
Dear Joseph: Thanks so much. Really made my morning. Best, SuZ
Date: 7/21/2018 9:14:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, SuZ.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Line: I appreciate your support. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 10/31/2017 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem with great imagery.. such a shame you do not post more..
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/31/2017 7:48:00 AM
Hi Silent One: Hoping to write and post more after Christmas. Such a busy 18 months for me. Re-locating, renovations and travel. Sorry I haven’t had as much time to spend here reading and commenting as in the past. Be well and thanks for your kind comments always. SuZ
Date: 2/9/2017 5:09:00 AM
Well Suz, you know how much I love this one being that it won poet of the week at PFT. It is a beautiful autumn treasure! : ) 7
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Date: 1/31/2017 7:54:00 AM
Beautifully penned Suzanne...best wishes
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Date: 12/29/2016 6:54:00 AM
Beautifully expressed, Suzanne! For some strange reason autumn seems to appeal to our emotions more than all the other seasons. Her departure is deeply felt. ~ Take care & warm regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2016 8:31:00 PM
Fine seasonal poetry here! I am glad I checked out your work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/18/2016 7:10:00 PM
a FAVE back at ya. It doesn't get better than this!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/18/2016 9:43:00 PM
Love ya. !!

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