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Using the snow to make white chocolate, And we cheerfully waltz down a sponge street. As we melt away in the sweet, sugary clouds, I can't wait for our hands to meet! Because you're so sweet, I'll make it bitter, And I use more meringue that usual. A kersch-flavored cherry carriage rolls in, And to the next station, being careful. Wearing the scent of lovely vanilla and with an Xmas ticket, I buy your favorite tart at the Chiffon Cake Street shop. I walk delicately to your home so I don't drop the cake, So please wait for me as I skip on a gumdrop. I stop at the candle fields, Enjoying the bright colors, red, blue, and yellow. I drink a glass of red juice, Tonight is a special night where our love will grow~! I won't take much more time to get to you, I wonder if my cake is okay? Wait, my reindeer is running away! Flying with a red-nose express through the grey. When the snow falls, it's a light acrylic pink, My fingers are colored purple when I touch it. I can't take your call right now, I promise though, When I come, you'll get a big Christmas star tonight! With a sugary frosting, I paint a heart on the tree, Love will be in the air tonight. So wait for me, I have to walk delicately, I won't drop the cake, alright? For the Children's Christmas or Holiday Tale competition

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Date: 12/7/2014 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautifully imaginative poem.
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:07:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/6/2014 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations, La Noel, enjoyed the story. Blessings eve
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 12/6/2014 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:02:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/6/2014 8:41:00 AM
nicely done poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:02:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/5/2014 9:27:00 PM
A sugary delight. c\Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:43:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/5/2014 3:59:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/5/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 11/23/2014 1:21:00 PM
oh this poem is so filled of amazing imagery i could dive in and eat right now - good luck in the contests this is charming:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2014 12:01:00 PM
Thank you :) Hugs

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