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L-O-V-E

love is something that you should respect for of all emotions it's worst harm is regret it gives freely with no thought to object from one to another hopeful prospect something sacred that one should protect and with deepest desire one should accept but the dark side of love is that one can reject for to give love, one's heart has to elect love is not a thing that you can easily eject it's tangled strings will slowly egress lest love use it's power to hate and detest or worst of all be defeated by distress no, no, no, this thing love i must redress give up too soon, no i protest all this time that i have obsessed it is for good reason i make this request i will contest till i conquest if that is what you will but prove to you this one thing; my love you cannot kill

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Date: 9/24/2012 2:55:00 PM
Lovely write John Loving x
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:59:00 AM
Yes, I love the rhyming... meaningful thought of love, John.
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Date: 1/14/2012 3:14:00 AM
passionate write john, to top it off, wonderfully rhyme too!
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Date: 1/13/2012 7:34:00 PM
Well done John, loved it, love is stronger, Brenda : )
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Date: 1/12/2012 6:59:00 AM
Thank you for reeding my poem John,this one L-O-V-E is lovely,and nerly like my "to my man" it is abut giving love.....oxox BIG hug Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/12/2012 6:07:00 AM
The complications of love.. Sometimes we complicate things too much instead of just let things run its course.. You made me laugh with your comment on my poem. Will have to show it to my friend ;)
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Date: 1/8/2012 3:32:00 AM
A lesson in love john, really enjoyed this, so positive. happy new year. harry
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:20:00 PM
This really is lovely John :)
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Date: 1/6/2012 2:12:00 AM
I too have crie in God's presence and just think ho he sings songs over us and he to weeps over us how amazing, God bless you and ekep you John
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Date: 1/6/2012 2:08:00 AM
aww thank you for yur comments John i eans a lot. and I love this poem nd I treasure Gods gift of Love, you take care God bless
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Date: 1/3/2012 2:59:00 AM
Excellent summation of a state well known, luckily never experienced hate and detest but surely have experienced all the rest! Here's to the love one cannot kill, here's to the joy despair and thrill! Big hugs Lizzie
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Date: 1/1/2012 9:02:00 PM
mmmmm... powerful and leaves me with a longing... to whom is it for I wonder
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Date: 12/31/2011 5:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading you thoughts about love..I don't remember "Buck And The Preacher"..Am I too old or too young or did you come out when I was focused on rearing a family?..Sara
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Date: 12/31/2011 2:58:00 PM
Awesome write John. I wish you a very Happy New YEARS and hope you have a fantastic year. Looks like I have lots of reading to catch up on I am so behind. Love phyl
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Date: 12/31/2011 8:44:00 AM
Great write on LOVE my friend..... Happy New Year John....Michael
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