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Kuhio Street At 5am

I am sitting here on Kuhio Street with the old Honolulu blues again. The early day shift's coming on their beat in the midst of the breezy, pre-dawn game, where the last of the midnight street life girls and their pimps argue at Jack in the Box, and hotel crews, aloha shirts and curls, grab a cup on their way to cope with lots of tourists immune to all history of this port. The last black stretch limousine from the night heads home and the touristy families stumble from hotel "da kine" to Hawaiian holiday on remains of a past era's colonized domains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/22/2008 7:25:00 PM
I remember good old Kuhio street. I lived right off it for years. I remember when they ordered the hookers over to Kuhio from Kalakaua street back in the late 70s or early 80s. I haven't been back there much since 88, when I moved to my new island in the middle of the Puget Sound, north of Seattle. I prefer this island. I always hated the racist locals that hated me, a howlie. Great poem, I can visualize and remember it all like yesterday, a friggin nightmare. Great poem ~Peace~Gar
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Date: 7/22/2008 7:49:00 AM
I can relate to this having been to Hawaii - but what is "da kine" - we have been trying to figure it out after passing by 'Dog's" place of business. Well done..
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Date: 7/22/2008 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:18:00 AM
A real life poem from a place sought to escape life and all its problems - Congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/21/2008 8:23:00 AM
True to life write. I didn't know there were any Jack in the Boxes left. They were growing mainland then disappeared. Congratulations on your poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/20/2008 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations Ahellas on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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