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Korean Commas

What am I to say to you dear sweet Jim You have chased me away and now I am gone But what about you broken by your promises To me it's a sad old song, you've been gone for way to long I doubt you knew, fondly whispered memories- same old song For me there is and will be nothing left to do You could never now complete the man I knew The words were clear I was left in the shadows now with out you Same old memories same old you I cried untill heavens turned blue I am not ready for challenge I will not play the game I am still hurt from the memories, hiding from the pain Embarrassed becasue I am left standing here this way Alone because of a man whose arms I have held so long Caught burying worries and facing all the blame But what about you, forgive yourself and start again You'll be the same old guy to all of them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/4/2013 8:25:00 AM
This was full of heart & pain. I understand the feelings written in your lines. Admittedly, I am curious on the meaning of the title. Nice work!
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Date: 9/5/2013 12:43:00 PM
I guess it's a kiss off.
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Courtney Courtney
Date: 9/5/2013 12:42:00 PM
well Jim is a Korean and he's been reading in so I let him know him and his are to be very happy and that I am there no more.

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