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Knife of Silence

You whip out your weapon and wield it with ease Your silent stiletto sends me to my knees

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Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 10/31/2015 9:37:00 AM

Silence is power.So much weaved artistically in killer lines.Wow,silence is power.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 12:10:00 PM

Hello Tim, Congratulations, A nice "Pierced" win. Love LINDA **

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/7/2015 6:30:00 PM

Oh, well done. You said so much with a few words..I would have placed this much higher. Congrats. BG

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/7/2015 5:37:00 PM

Did you mean "Weild"? either way I enjoyed your poem Tim. Congrats.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 7:09:00 AM

Oh stiletto really piercing ...Congrats on win...Love Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2015 12:53:00 PM

Love your take on the theme Tim many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2012 3:58:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work with this great work..It had great flow to it...Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2012 12:22:00 PM

Good one!..ckongrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/26/2012 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations Tim hope you got up again xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 8:56:00 PM

TIM;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/25/2012 5:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/25/2012 5:41:00 PM

This piece has got the "WOW" factor. Great write...congrats my friend on this win. One love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 12:55:00 PM

I remember this cool poem. Congrats on your win, Tim.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2012 12:38:00 PM

Good job, Tim. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/25/2012 10:33:00 AM

Sometimes, silence shrieks louder than words... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/16/2012 8:24:00 AM

I like this Tim , it makes me laugh but I'm not sure it should, am I a bad person ha ha xx

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/15/2012 4:15:00 PM

great work....silence is a deadly weapon.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/14/2012 9:07:00 PM

You have a winner here Tim. I wrote on the same thing but took it in a different direction. Thank you so much for your very kind words on my Christmas in Heaven win. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2012 6:55:00 PM

Oh I think this is so unique it's bound to win! Thanks for your kind words cher Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 6:55:00 PM

oooh, COOL.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/14/2012 9:33:00 AM

Well-done poem, Tim. Good luck!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2012 9:18:00 AM

What an awesome display of talented words my friend! This weapon of choice can be deadly! I love this write! Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 8/14/2012 8:30:00 AM

Tim, you gotta be careful of those stiletto's they can do big damage....I like ...David