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Kitty Underneath the Christmas Tree

It's an eve before christmas day, My darling can't come home yet. He said he's in the middle of a traffic, Caused of people crazy over shopping spree. I felt sadden and blue... My baby can't come on due, We'll miss the kiss in the mistletoe, No warmth hugs and "i love you's ." Twelve midnight I'm alone and sad. The expected gift still on the road, Waiting for my baby ,feels so bored. Eyes get tired and begun to close... Then all of a sudden I heard a noise. Trying to figure out what's outside the room. I saw my baby beside the christmas tree, Playing with a kitty,his surprise gift for me. *AiyaH De Torres 12/18/2013

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Date: 3/17/2014 8:52:00 AM
AiyaH Such a creative and sweet write. A cute little story that entertains with an emotional rollercoaster. HEE HEE The answer to my What Am I poem is Rules and Instructions.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/17/2014 8:57:00 AM
ok.. ..think that one is cool..rules and instructions... most us don;t know how to follow the rules and instrucitons.. ;'(( ...good job!!! ^__^
Date: 12/18/2013 12:16:00 PM
- I love this sweet poem - beautiful picture, AiyaH !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 12:23:00 PM
...I love you more ,my DEar LIse :) ...your everyday visit makes my day so happy and felt um loved!.. Thank you so mucH.. ^_^
Date: 12/18/2013 11:39:00 AM
I see you have a sense of humor.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2013 12:16:00 PM
Yes, it is very romantic
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 12:01:00 PM
thanks, you liked it??.. ^_^

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