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Kite

A little girl begin to fly a kite. She smiled with great hope as it took a flight; She was joyous when it went at great height. An evil kite came and she lost the fight The kite flew away far-off from her sight, And little cute girl cried from day to night. ______________________________________ Date - 9th January 2017

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Date: 6/5/2017 5:30:00 PM
Hello Augustus,this is a sad poem about the girl.It is sad that she had lost her kite.I have enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 1/16/2017 4:00:00 AM
- It feels like losing a game ... painful experience for a young child (but must be learned) - A great poem, Augustus - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2017 11:21:00 AM
Lovely comment, thanks - Augustus.
Date: 1/9/2017 9:41:00 AM
Very nice write ... Let it help the little girl to grow up to the hard realities of life ...
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Date: 1/9/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thanks for the great comment, Sir. - Augustus.

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