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Kissing In the Rain - Contest

noses together open mouthed we kiss ... on tippy toes Pic # 2 hidden kisses umbrella hideaway... rain what rain Pic # 7 rain is falling natures watering can ... lift face and enjoy Pic # 6 splashing puddles running laughing soaking ... natures shower room Pic #4 Pic#2. Pic # 4 Pic #6. Pic #7 penned 22/05/2013

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Poet Tacito

Date: 5/23/2013 7:40:00 AM

Innocence. Sensuality. Playful. The way it should be. Fantastic!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2013 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Drake for stopping by....Seren

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/22/2013 8:24:00 PM

Raining wet, erotic thoughts, nice haiku

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/23/2013 1:14:00 AM

Hello my friend, knew there would be one with erotic thoughts lol...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/22/2013 6:26:00 AM

This is a great natural way to express these pictures completely my friend! I really enjoyed reading these enlightening poems here this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/22/2013 9:09:00 AM

Hi Russell, thanks for commenting ..Seren

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 5/22/2013 2:08:00 AM

Tippy Toes, Barefoot In Her Rain, Twined Their Fingers, Interlaced, Their Love. I Love Number Six, Splashing Puddles Laughing As Running, Aneath An Awning To Gaze Deeply Into One Anothers Eyes; A Kiss And We're Off Again; 'Beautiful!' Love, John

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/22/2013 2:24:00 AM

Hi John, did u see the pictures relating to these haiku. I love your examples, hope you will enter in contest. Seren