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Kisses Through the Distance


                                          In the still morning  
                                          I felt a kiss on my cheek
                                          and I closed my eyes.
                                          I knew it's the sudden breeze
                                          but I whispered your name.

                                          I take a deep breath
                                          surrounded by gardenias
                                          and blow you a kiss.
                                          It will be there tomorrow...
                                          Open windows, doors, and lips.

To Deborah Guzzi.

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  1. Date: 3/24/2014 9:04:00 AM
    This is quite beautiful!

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 4:07:00 PM
    I picked a title which attracted my eye ..and I remember this effervescent beauty dedicated to Deborah..Just sooo romantic.Maybe one day you get to wrlite another one.Tnks for stopping by my fiction poem papito..Have a happy weekend.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:20:00 AM
    Ohh I remember my dream LOL and you were so sweet to play along! [mail] Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:28:00 AM
    Oh nice Ruben! - Shaz

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 9:09:00 AM
    beautiful poem! so sweet :) p.s. you commented on one of my poems why it didn't win and I think I was deliberately not placed. I don't like thinking that and I can't prove it, but I believe it all the same. p.p.s I can't believe you know the story of o, lol :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Man O, the tree of poetry blooms extravagantly. I am proudly inspired by your awesome inspiration. Well done, friend.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:23:00 AM
    So romantically wistful. Debbie is a lucky girl love, Kathy

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:31:00 PM
    Ruben, a beautiful dedication... I did not see your entry in my contest... maybe you missed my contest.. Maybe next time... always~ PD

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:22:00 PM
    amazing lines so sweet and tender Ruben.. congrats on a special win for a super write luv.. thankjxx for prayers too,...

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:49:00 PM
    Love the last line! Congrats to you on your victory!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:18:00 AM
    Such a romantic write!Belated congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Oh man..[blush] now everyone's gonna know I have a crush on YOU [blush]Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:58:00 AM
    Ruben congrats on your win, excellent write..David

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:49:00 AM
    Bravo! Congratulations on the win. This one was my favorite.

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 3:39:00 AM
    Very romantic - loved it :-) Congratulations on your win, Ruben . Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 3:20:00 AM
    Nicely penned Ruben. Very elegant and romantic. You surely know how to make the ladies swoon.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:02:00 PM
    My Man, Ruben - Your poetry always has - and always will - blow me away! Quite stunning, my friend. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Peace always, J

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 4:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem winning.

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti
    Date: 8/30/2012 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    came back to read this again, you excell at the short forms. i still think of the one you wrote for the cancer contest.
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Ruben, this is SO deserving of a win. NOW I can see it get the honor it so deserved and missed out on the first time it was in a contest. Big congratulations to you. this is true poetry.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:38:00 AM
    congrats Ruben on your 1st place win, enjoyed the poem hugs vie