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Kisses of Light

With lips firmly pressed The sun gives the horizon, Warm kisses of light.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:42:00 PM

Creative imagery.

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/18/2009 12:22:00 PM

Nice last line, I love the entire concept.

Tyler Davis

Date: 4/17/2009 11:57:00 PM

Impressive! I like your style.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/7/2009 12:23:00 PM

INTOXICATING...All the best. Thx for your comment re. MonaLisa. All the best.

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 4/6/2009 11:15:00 PM

Wonderful write, makes me feel like a flower, lol....Love Aleera

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/6/2009 3:08:00 PM

sry I meant ut explains..lol

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/6/2009 3:08:00 PM

itttt sry

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/6/2009 3:07:00 PM

wow! you really got it captured here...i explains the scene in a perfect poetic manner....Maryam~~

Brian Strand

Date: 4/6/2009 12:57:00 AM

You capture the image so well Raul.Rgds Brian

Steve Edmonds

Date: 4/5/2009 5:21:00 PM

Great work, nice warm imagery.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/5/2009 2:03:00 PM

lovely imaginery,the sun,warm kisses of light sends me right to a very good mood-charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/5/2009 11:38:00 AM

Wonderfully done my friend..the images are beautiful.

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/5/2009 10:44:00 AM

This is beautiful... so peaceul. The image is burned into my mind and I can see the sun clearly rising as I read. It is so warming as we recieve rain mixed with snowhere today. Great write. Smiles from Lolita

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2009 10:23:00 AM

A beautiful and sensual haiku, Raul. I had never thought about daybreak as "warm kisses of light," but it is a brilliant comparison. Great work! Love, Carolyn