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Kiss of Fate

While sitting on a hollow log I was kissed by an ugly frog It turned into an ugly queen My oh my, what a hideous scene I'd rather pull ticks from a dog!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/6/2013 4:04:00 PM
oh how i remember pulling tick off of dogs.
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Date: 8/28/2013 3:35:00 PM
Brilliant lines and imagery. Adorable read and such awesome talent :)
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Date: 8/28/2013 6:14:00 AM
I love how the last line anchors the whole thing together. All this incredible stuff going on around you, and you'd rather do something...unseemly lol Cool and witty piece; kudos! :)
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Milton Toran
Date: 8/28/2013 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm truly honored!...Milt
Date: 8/9/2013 10:07:00 AM
a funny one Milton, the frog queen , enjoyed your clever write, ~always, Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 6:14:00 AM
Lol, nice write. -Patrick Farley IV
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:36:00 PM
LOL, thanks for a good laugh : )
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Date: 8/7/2013 6:02:00 AM
great Milt love your humor here (7) Shadow x smiles
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Milton Toran
Date: 8/7/2013 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Shadow! I'll be stopping by soon to review your works. God bless U!...Milt
Date: 8/6/2013 8:23:00 AM
Ha! The grass isn't always greener, eh? =) This was a charming Limerick.
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Milton Toran
Date: 8/6/2013 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Drake!...Milt

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