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Kiss Me Good Morning

Her faint voice quietly sings a cheerful love song mixed in with the tapping sounds of the falling water from inside the clear glass shower The morning light illuminates the room and I can see her reflection in the half-steamed bathroom mirror A gorgeous sight happiness radiating off her cheeks and a smile you could die for Quietly I sneak downstairs and start breakfast nice plump honey browned sausage links a couple of poached eggs finely cut hash brown potatoes garnished with some fresh succulent strawberries and a hot cup of lemon tea Merrily she enters the room with an I love you grin wraps her arms around me and kisses me good morning.

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Date: 1/4/2016 4:48:00 PM
Hi Tim, your usual romantic self i see. An excellent write from your pen. Live the moments and write the moments, keeping the Love alive. May your golden pen keep singing Tim. A seven for this little gem....Vladislav
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:33:00 AM
Sweet. :)
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Date: 12/7/2015 4:39:00 PM
congrats on the placement Tim, lovely write....just hope you didn't poach the eggs you poached....
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:18:00 PM
We need to change your name to Romantic love, like always beautiful! Tim, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/7/2015 10:01:00 AM
lovely poem..congrats on the win Tim :)
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Date: 12/7/2015 2:57:00 AM
Mr Romantic. Excellent joy and emotion of love Tim. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:45:00 PM
Nice one Tim! Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/6/2015 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations! Lovely way to start the day... Romantic, light, was nice to read.
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Date: 12/6/2015 9:57:00 PM
As romantic as ever Tim.. Congrats on great win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:05:00 PM
ha, I like the way Nathan on the bottom calls you a lucky Poet :)
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:04:00 PM
Tim <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/19/2015 4:37:00 PM
A beautiful moment in time! Sensual and romantic. I like your appetizing breakfast, too:) // paul
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Date: 11/19/2015 10:27:00 AM
lucky dog. very awesome write
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Date: 11/18/2015 2:05:00 PM
Sweet. You manage to be practical, light-hearted and practical all in one write. Good one, Tim!
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:20:00 AM
Tim, my friend you are a great chef and poet but leaving the vision upstairs to go downstairs and prepare breakfast...? Haha. Very romantic and tender poem! A seven!
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:43:00 AM
SHOWER POWER! WOW
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Date: 11/18/2015 3:33:00 AM
- What a morning ..... with this adorable kiss, Tim - Lovely! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:10:00 AM
Good Morning Tim... Now you got me hungry , That's. kind of breakfast I love. A romantic ,sensual and sweet poem. Love the tiny details. Love the last four lines so much..Makes me picture an ideal couple in love. I love it..A fave.
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Date: 11/17/2015 5:07:00 PM
Well how sweet is that? And I don't just mean the poem...that breakfast is very tempting, Tim.
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Date: 11/17/2015 4:50:00 PM
what a beautiful and cozy picture you've painted here, tim! a great poem which i enjoyed very much...
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