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Kiss

that kiss from you like footprints in the sand keeps my heartbeats ticking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/5/2011 10:29:00 AM
Nice haiku with good images, Suresh. I think you should give once over to the syllable counts,
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:24:00 PM
a lovley write, love the second line, enjoyed your haiku Suresh,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:43:00 AM
Nice Haiku,
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