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"kiss"

Inches away our lips reach now they are one..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2010 8:58:00 PM

Sweet, Michael! weee what away to express a kiss. Should make her day,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/1/2010 1:33:00 PM

sweet! enjoyed--Thanks for your comments on my poems!

Sarah Hales

Date: 9/1/2010 6:47:00 AM

oh kiss me ha ha ha love it ... It is the best feeling as one ... sarah x

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 6:21:00 AM

Nice observation. Quite scientific, Michael, hahah

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2010 5:05:00 AM

Its almost like saying should I kiss her or shouldn't I? Great senryu Michael, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/31/2010 6:11:00 PM

Ah, the suspense when lips are approaching for a kiss! Very nice senryu, Michael. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/31/2010 3:26:00 PM

Luv this one ..kissy face is good and your words so romantic .. wonderful thoughts when reading Michael... and we are in Maryland on the white beaches for business and pleasure this week ..luv

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2010 2:56:00 PM

Great romantic write that is so simple..Keep the creative and romantic pen flowing..Sara