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Kingdom of Doubters

Reacting to every stimulus Passing judgments with every thought This is good, I'll say And that, well isn't so hot Now words are coming back to me So deep they haven't budged And cliche til my eyes glaze over Judge not lest yet ye be judged But perhaps I've been too hasty Reacting against my brainwashing And maybe the true meaning was lost To a consciousness in infancy And if Einstein is indeed correct With the Theory of Relativity Then a strong case has to be made That things are not as they seem Always we think we know With a label, judgment sets Not taking into consideration The million variables not thought of yet As Copernicus proposed the radical theory That the Earth orbits the Sun Just one of infinite awakenings And this journey has just begun I remember my blazing insecurities When adhering to popular beliefs And the emptiness of talking parrots Living the definition of insanity This happiness I am now living In the face of such disharmony I propose a new dimension may await For those preparing to release all beliefs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/26/2011 7:11:00 AM
interesting, David. It is similar in some respects to my own you commented on at length. Alot here and packed full of subjects to be explored wuth the help of the ONE. writing has always helped me to explain these things to myself foremost when I seek to find Truth and attempt to live it. .... yes ...living the definition of insanity ... doing the same thing over and over again and expecting a different result. Thank you for sharing this David
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today David. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2011 10:34:00 AM
Creative and thoughful expressions , David
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:55:00 PM
Very well thought out work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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