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Kind Love

I know that our Love is True. For everything we do, surpasses what I've been through. I care not what they say, for I get to see you Everyday. Whatever dreams you may have for us I always want to be Apart of. I know that you where truly sent to me from Above. To you its my love, that you will receive ALL OF! With you is a blessing that I WANT BE DEPRIEVED OF! I adore that its is I that you take Hold Of. To everyone it is you that I highly Speak Of. So amazing how our love fits each other Perfect, like some Suede Glove. As we journey day by day, we share precious love in every way. For it is my soul and mind that you elevate, I pray for this continuous love each and everyday. This relationship that I am So Proud of. The kind of magical romance that I don't ever want to Get Rid Of

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/20/2011 3:26:00 PM

* “This Sounds As Though A Love Divine * Dear Beautiful Lakisa * Ow * How I Love Your Beautiful Name * Tis As Sweeetened Honey * Dripping From A Lovely Sugary Hive * Just Like The Heavenly Love * Brushed In This Beautiful Painting of A Poe * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *

Lakisa Battie
Date: 5/20/2011 3:40:00 PM

OMG, thank u so truly I'm amazed of your pleasant comments, very fladdering. IDK what else to say.... Have a blessed weekend and do enjoy.... Sincerely LaKisa,

Lakisa Battie

Date: 5/7/2011 1:06:00 PM

Thanx Carolina. N I will take what u suggeested N use it, great inputs.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/7/2011 12:48:00 PM

Dear Lakisa, the feelings you portray in this write are come out loud and clear, but there is some improvement needed in the write without disturbing the content. For ex:"I know that our love is true/For everything we do/Surpasses what I have been through. I care not what they say/For I get to see you everyday/And I feel so blessed in this way...". This is just a suggestion. The idea is to shorten the lines, and to make it less sound like a talk. Give it a try. Hope this helps. :) Caroline.