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I am keeper of the midnight clock A watchful eye, when darkness peaks With one eye closed to mock your sleep, The other eye revolves to keep the world in check 'till morning breaks They often wonder where I hide when evening shadows stretch out long My saucer eyes, will search the night as a sentinel until first light I perch, attached to the red-tile slope upon the ridge, and then will scope for predators within the grid In the shadows of the evening's grace I'm a silhouette on moonlight's face You can trust my wisdom and my song For I am keen to know, somehow how time itself, will sway and bend I'll stay awhile, become your friend Then off I'll fly, when summer ends When first the chill of autumn's call, you will look for me as twilight falls to say farewell, for I am called But, halls of dark are lonely now Without me there, wind can't compare For now, you see, the loft is bare When summer echoes in the wind it will call for me, and I'll be there When you hear sounds, much like the wind You'll know it's me, with a lonely whoooo I won't be asking who are you It's just my way, to say I'm home _______________________________________________________ 2/5//16 Submitted for "Owls" Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 2/16/2016 12:38:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:03:00 AM
Wonderful write Carrie n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this.
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:36:00 PM
This is superb and deserving of your first placement Carrie. #7
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:44:00 PM
Well Done Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:24:00 AM
Congrats well written x good image x
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Date: 2/15/2016 8:32:00 AM
Very nice study of owls, Carrie. Congratulations on a good win.
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Date: 2/15/2016 6:59:00 AM
Great personification , Carrie. Congratulations on your win for this well penned jewel. Peace
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:32:00 AM
Beautiful personification, Carrie. Many congrats on your top notch placement. Elaine
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:31:00 PM
Carrie, your “Keeper of the Night ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:38:00 AM
- It's not often we see owls, since they are night animals - but they are beautiful creature - Great written Carrie, good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2016 8:37:00 PM
Oh wow i love this poem, beautifully written
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