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Keep It In Your Pants

He was getting old- but he wasn’t cold He still had that fire burning deep within And the urge to commit that adulteress sin. A sub conscious thought to prove that he Was still the man from many years ago Because on his face it didn’t show. When comments are made about How good he looks for his age That’s when he’ll climb on stage. The ego is the downfall of every man And to prove himself, he’ll take a stand. How foolish can we men be And it’s shown throughout history. Men will always fall under a woman s spell From that point on, he goes to hell. Cleopatra queen of the Nile- Sampson and Delilah Helen of troy-just to name a few Took down these men, and knew exactly what to do. When it comes to women “ we are weak” The sexual fulfillment is what we seek. Once the sexual desire is satisfied The man will try to say good-bye. But he’ll be pulled back into that web of sin And on the women s face- there is a grin. It started off when Eve ate the forbidden fruit And convinced Adam to eat it too. It has gone on till this present day What else can I say. Now these celebrities are in the news It is not something that they would choose. Men are building their own web And when the spider comes “ they are dead”. Ha-ha- ha- you’ve got to love it!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 7:08:00 AM
Yes Louis you were right, I sure did like this one. Awesome write thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 7:19:00 PM
I like what you're saying here. How did you know I would like it? :) ~JSLambert
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:44:00 AM
Don't consider myself a spider, although some famous men are snakes! Entertaining , amusing poem.
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:23:00 PM
Since Adam bit the infamous apple from Lady Eve..,.this is the case louis .. a grand write and the the line that got my attention .. the ego is the downfall of men.. and women too luv.. awesome and intense but all too true.. the spell of the femme fatale is always prevalent luv.. thankxx for the soup maill
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:09:00 PM
great pen louis
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:56:00 PM
Yes, this happens to men of all income levels, all educational levels, and all moral levels..Good work about a topic that is of interest to all men and women alike..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:12:00 PM
Ohh silly one, men do what they enjoy doing, no onhas to talk them into anyones pants! LOL Light & Love
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:16:00 PM
JUST ONE LOOK WAS ALL IT TOOK. HA-HA THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT.

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