Katrina

Nothing out of place Just playful late summer breeze A gentle warning... For children often forget That Mother has a temper

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:37:00 PM

wow, this is a cool one, Tim. Big congrats.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Tim. What an honor to share placement with you. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2012 3:36:00 AM

CONGRATS TIM ON AN EXCELLENT VIVID WRITE AND WONDERFUL WIN LUV .. WE R EXPECTING 'SANDY' UP AND DOWN EAST COAST THIS WEEKEND LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 7:08:00 PM

TIM, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win, Tim! hugs:)LG

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2012 2:12:00 PM

T, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2012 3:31:00 PM

Tim, soup-mail...xox~pd

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/30/2012 4:34:00 PM

A stark reminder, of the power of nature, Tim, hope folk are safe with Issac i believe the name is, in the same area. I like this in Tanka form.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/30/2012 4:17:00 PM

And how! in so many facets, Tim. Cool poem that brings us back to the facts of life and death.

Tim B

Date: 8/28/2012 5:40:00 PM

Hopefully they are more aware this time Tim. Well said, the fury of mother nature is wise to be wary of.

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/28/2012 3:53:00 PM

That hurricane unfortunately caught a lot of people living in New Orleans by surprise. It's been seven years now, but the victims still remember it vividly.