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Justice Getting What She Deserves

"Keep walkin, caus we ain't talkin crazy long legs!" "You're such a weirdo." "We don't want you round here!" "Can't you take a hint??" "What a loser." She walks away Like she's walked away Five hundred and one times before What has she done? Why do they hate her so? Running now Into the bathroom She can't let them see her tears Black mascara runs down her pale white skin Mercifully no one follows her Looking in the mirror She wishes she could disappear Vanish without a trace "Stork Girl" "Big Bird" "Amazon Woman" "The Laughing Giraffe" If only she could be small Pretty Like those other girls The cool cruel ones She didn't need them to be her friend All she wanted was to be left alone To come to school and go home To have a single quiet day A "don't stare at me!" day She takes a tissue out of her purse Removes the mascara from her eyes and face Fixes her hair Takes a deep breath and goes to her next class She sits at the back of the class Never at the front The new boy The cool boy Smiling says hi He's tall Like her Emotions stir After class he says "Can you show me around?" She smiles back and says "Sure" She can't believe he wants her to She says "My name is Sue" He says "I'm glad to meet you, my name is Simon Loo. As they walk together down the hall One of the mean girls Calls out "Why are you hanging out with big bird! He turns and says "Get lost loser, Sue's the nicest and prettiest girl in the school!" Sue smiles and takes his hand Suddenly she doesn't wish to be invisible any more. By: Richard Lamoureux For Justice Contest Written September 3rd 2015

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Date: 9/11/2015 12:10:00 AM
Richard ... I can't wait to show this to my granddaughter ... she was 6' by the time she was 15. She's always been the tallest until she got into high school and felt out of place. Now she doesn't stand out in a crowd because she's tall ... she stands out now because she's proud and has an air of confidence about her. Lovely poem with great ending.....Sassy
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Date: 9/9/2015 11:40:00 PM
Wonderful write... Congrats. Regards, Bobby
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Date: 9/9/2015 12:58:00 PM
A great poem about justice, Richard. I really enjoyed your write and congratulate you on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 9/9/2015 11:30:00 AM
Richard much congratulations. Ps I read your short story on the reunion. Waiting for a novel from you! Loved it wanted more.
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:34:00 AM
Richard, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:50:00 PM
I really enjoyed your work. Congrats Richard! ;-)
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:55:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:46:00 PM
Fantastic Write Richard! The words you used in name calling hits it right in the spot that really hurts. Great awareness in this write. Thank you for entering into my contest.
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Date: 9/5/2015 12:04:00 PM
Great poem my friend. I always took up for the victims of such ignorant tormenting by others. Kids are so often so very cruel and have not a clue how much it may hurt the victim-sometimes scars for life! A7 pm on the way.
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Date: 9/5/2015 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I also appreciate the heads up on the typo.
Date: 9/4/2015 5:58:00 AM
High school teenagers can be so cruel. This reminds me of a poor girl Vicki who the masses victimize. You know its really sad. Because these poor souls that succumb to these torments never enjoy or go to a high school reunion. Their experience has traumatize and embarrass them so much they want to forget high school and the jerks that picked on them. So sad. Great write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
A very thoughtful comment Michael.
Date: 9/3/2015 9:45:00 AM
Sad at first but am glad you shed light at the end... =')!!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Olive.
Date: 9/3/2015 7:08:00 AM
The sword of justice is the sharpest of all! Excellent development, exceptional finish! A seven dear, Richard!
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
Date: 9/2/2015 7:48:00 PM
Wonderful poem Richard...School years are so difficult with kids developing at different rates, The Ugly Duckling Syndrome turning into a beautiful swan.
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks atom.
Date: 9/2/2015 6:13:00 PM
Wow, you made my cry boy........ Awesome write a 7 and a winner in my eyes. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 9/2/2015 4:53:00 PM
Love this write, Richard; justice is served. A sad heart-aching start, but such a nice positive ending! // paul
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 9/2/2015 2:22:00 PM
This reminds me of the movie; "Shes all that" with Freddie Prince and the girl who played Lanney, I hope I spelled that right write..yep, I knows all too well about these issues, having been raised with six sisters. I didn't have such problems myself, I was the ruffian in the schools, and not the bullie dear poet, I would kick their a** ooooo I could not stands the bullie! I boxed for my neighborhood as a kid! Always won! (-1) Great impromptu write Richard. Have a great day sir..much love, james
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:03:00 AM
I've never tried boxing but I do enjoy watching it, much to the displeasure of my wife who finds it barbaric. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 9/2/2015 2:10:00 PM
- A pleasure to read ..... give me a great feeling of justice - I wish you good luck in the contest, Richard - (I quit posting for contest) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2015 11:45:00 AM
Positivity oh I love so much Richard! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Upma, I made some changes at the beginning.
Date: 9/2/2015 11:41:00 AM
Loved this and the theme! Great use of dialogue. A 7 at least!
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Thomas, I wasn't sure where I was going with this one when I started but it seemed to somehow come together. I made a few changes at the beginning. Thanks as well for the 7.
Date: 9/2/2015 11:22:00 AM
Fabulous descriptive write - so glad it had a happy positive ending - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:07:00 PM
I am a fan of happy endings, thanks Jan Hugs Rick.
Date: 9/2/2015 11:13:00 AM
Lovely, Richard....Way to write about Sue, dear. It's always nice when the mean girls get a kick in the pants....This is justice...the sweet way. Hugs
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:09:00 PM
The great thing is she didn't have to go down to their level. Thanks for liking this one Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Date: 9/2/2015 10:46:00 AM
Nice dip into teenage angst, Rick. Lovely story. All the best int eh contest. hugs!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for the luck and the hug Kim. Hugs back to you.
Date: 9/2/2015 10:34:00 AM
Richard, I loved this story, as a bullied child myself your words ring true, I still recall that girl who would not look at anyone in the face, magnificent the way you see the world in words, and I am so happy you like my poem for you ~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2015 12:10:00 PM
Yes I like it very much, you got to the heart and in an artistic way.
Date: 9/2/2015 10:21:00 AM
I really enjoyed the ride of her pain bursting into joy. Good write ... CayCau
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thanks CayCay!

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