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Driving Under the Influence

“Your honor, after consulting with the District Attorney, we have agreed to a plea bargain agreement. The father, mother and sisters of the victim have requested that in lieu of a jail sentence, justice would better be served if my client be ordered to pay only restitution which would include the following”... Walk back to that street Crawl inside that wreck Feel his last heartbeat Touch his broken neck Wake up in their dream Face their blackest fears Hear his mother scream Weep their wretched tears Stumble through their haze Hate their morning lights Trudge through empty days Dread their sleepless nights Cower on their edge Hear their demons hiss Slip upon their ledge Fall in their abyss Toe the line you crossed Bear the cross you made Lose what they have lost Pay the price they paid

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Date: 9/21/2016 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations Tim on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:07:00 PM
Tim, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on huge win Tim with this superb write!
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Date: 6/30/2015 11:53:00 PM
TIM, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/30/2015 12:39:00 PM
wow... this is very touching. Sometimes we really need to walk the shoes of those we hurt.... Good read!
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:22:00 AM
A suitable bitterness, stylishly done. I get the feeling this inspiration may have been close to home, Tim. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/30/2015 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Viv! Your comments are always uplifting and unique (and sometimes very witty and funny) and yes, you are correct...This poem hits VERY close to home...Thanks again - Tim
Date: 5/26/2015 3:37:00 PM
I like the twist
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/30/2015 5:18:00 PM
So you like to Twist too? Well then, we'll have to go out dancing sometime...Thanks dear lady...I am still blown away (and honored) that you took the time to comment on so many of my poems
Date: 5/18/2013 8:44:00 PM
Hello Tim, Congratulations on your well deserved winning poem.. Hail Yeah! to all the dragon slayer winners :-) :-) :-) *LINDA
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:02:00 AM
very well written counselor....congrats on your win
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Date: 5/17/2013 2:02:00 PM
This is a very special poem. If only...congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/17/2013 9:18:00 AM
Wow......such a sensitive and compelling poem, .......a different twist on Dragon Slayers.....and it should be brought to this contest....an every day disgrace, unfortunately! Great subject, Tim!
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Date: 5/16/2013 9:01:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 10/4/2009 2:55:00 PM
Hey..I AM TO SATISFIED LOL.........now it says just what you wanted to say and the reader can hear it! GREAT revision! Now, send it of to MADD mothers against drunk driving ask them if they could use it to help the cause! Light & Love
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Date: 10/3/2009 3:46:00 PM
Seems a worthy cause to put out for folks to view, to me Tim. In my younger days I have been known to make this irresponsible call of judment myself. Thank God I was never involved in an accident that took anyone's life. There is always that chance though. Thanks for your comments today! Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/2/2009 10:20:00 PM
Tim , this is an extraordinary piece. You are rapidly rising in the ranks of my favorites with this gripping, relevant write. SO much emotional torment expressed in the content. I know what it's like to feel this helpless, empty feeling of loss. You've captured the consequence of one selfish person's careless, selfish actions. Very, very well done. Donna
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:16:00 PM
Tim I read all your work. You're amazing. Thanks...a friend....Marty
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Date: 10/2/2009 8:08:00 PM
Poets have a flaw, they never believe their work is good enough. Deb is right, this is very important subject matter and you presented it without flaw...Karla
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