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Just Where We Are

To stand in your love
emotions truly enriched
your lips upon mine
hold on to what we have now,
oh if we could alter time.

© Harry J Horsman 2013  

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  1. Date: 8/18/2013 1:33:00 PM
    I am now going to go look for more of your works, you write with heart. I like that, no better than like, I love how you put things into heartfelt images. Robert Henry Poulin.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 1:31:00 PM
    I love your poem: To stand in your love (usually tanka and haiku poets always use the first line as the poem title) Your lines 4 and 5 bring the poem together and give it sweet sadness. Harry, it is a beautiful very well constructed tanka worthy of an award and the way tanka should be.Very nice emotion. I like it much. Robert Henry Poulin

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 9:27:00 AM
    Yes indeed! I think at one point in anyone else's life, we do hope that we could alter time-- wonderfully said and romantic in a bit of melancholic way... very beautiful harry! Thank you for passing by and i am glad you enjoyed that tropical sunset...

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:43:00 PM
    I felt a little romantic flutter ... very nice :)

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 5:38:00 PM
    aah Harry you have us ladies sighing so romantic love it Shadow x

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 3:27:00 PM
    How awesome is this, Harry! Absolutely fabulous! You are such a romantic soul. Thanks for your visits to my work. Always great to hear from you! :)

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Harry, I absolutely love this Tanka of yours. How have you been? Haven't been on the soup for a while so nice to read you again. Take care ; ) Wilma

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:06:00 PM
    You are very young all the time my sweet friend. This wonderful poem is filled with full of romance. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:02:00 PM
    this sentimental mood awes me, harry... lovely in al ways... shine on!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 10:25:00 AM
    Put my name under the previous two harry, just love it xx

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 10:01:00 AM
    - I can write my name under Charma's comment .... agree with her. - Beautiful Harry! - Loove sweet Love!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:43:00 AM
    I love all poems that you pen Harry but nothing as beautiful as your romantic ones.A very sensual and beautiful tanka.-Charma