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Just So Near

" Just so Near " Time doth tell as so we know... That which we rarely hear. Our fancy so as winds do blow... Is life within one tear. One tiny bit of thought... Does slowly find a way. As freedom thusly bought... Makes way to light of day. Truly that we've ever sought... Was always just so near. Within that bit of teardrop caught... As now does disappear. Time doth tell we'll never know... That which we need not hear. For 'twas ever ours as days did go... Way of just one tear. SeaWolf ©

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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:40:00 AM
    What a beautifully crafted poem! Delightful flow, rhyme and imagery... BRAVO, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Bravo! Beautifully written!

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 11:08:00 AM
    You are a brilliant poet Caribbean!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Quite nice SeaWolf! Impressive! BTW-I didn't understand your comment to me...can you please explain? Thank you!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 6:33:00 AM
    Oh yes like this one x

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:12:00 PM
    A very nice read, especially the third verse. It evokes a sense of the fleeting nature of life.