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Just One More Day

Inspired By The Contest but Not Applicable If I had just one more day with you These would be my wishes I would come up from behind you when you started doing dishes My arms would then caress you as I held you from behind and kissed each ear so softy then whisper you are mine I would spin you like a top till your eyes and mine both met then I'd take you in my arms and carry you to bed The rest I'll tell you later For it's not prudent here to say When God gives me the privilege To be with you just one more day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/4/2015 7:16:00 PM
So well crafted with splendid cadence and rhyming. Extremely entertaining my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/2/2015 8:30:00 PM
Well done Jerry, and I liked the way you kept your poem clean so we can use our own imagination. I reckon you both fell asleep - Lindsay
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/4/2015 5:59:00 AM
How'd you know, thank for stopping by mate

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