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Just Living InThe Moment---Picture Perfect

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Just Living InThe Moment---Picture Perfect

I sit watching the sparrows at play, They flit and flirt, and then fly away. No trouble rests on their shoulders, Their concern is just living today. My thoughts would be like a sparrow’s, Delighting in the moments accorded. For tomorrow is always a question, Today, peace is the trophy awarded.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 9:10:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS BARBARA, Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:09:00 PM
    nice win....always...PD

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 3:29:00 PM
    this is a very sweet little rhyming poem, Barbara. I enjoyed seeing it in my contest. Congrats for the HM.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Much wisdom stated here, congratulations. I am glad I was able to read this piece, congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Perfect. Well stated. I love the fact that you used sparrows. They are the salt of the earth and bring me joy each day as watch them at my feeders. Living in the moment. If only we could. Kilmer

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Good advice I need to take, 'live in the moment'...thinking of the future too much lately. Lovely write! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 3:32:00 PM
    nice poem! i especially love the ending and the rhyme of accorded and awarded...