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You begin life with a scream, To some you are a burden,to some you are a dream, Travelling through life,is like playing on a team, Will you learn from your elders,or blow your own steam, Many persons journey will be rough,through life some will flow, People will come and people will go, Memories to cherish,or persons you wish you didn't know, But take this point seriously,try obtaining wisdom while you grow, This journey is for everyone,who took the first breath, Be conscious on your journey,be fruitful in your steps, Don't be fooled,life is not a gamble,learn the spiritual depth, Get connected to the energy,before the flesh,gives way to death,,,

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Date: 1/19/2022 5:25:00 AM
What a distinctive, mentoring poem, Richard. An accomplished pen. A flowing read. A shown esteem for language. Respectfully, sally
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/21/2022 8:31:00 AM
thank you Sally, love Richie
Date: 9/16/2017 8:41:00 PM
An excellent write Richard, beautiful lines, rhyme, rhythm and wisdom. I truly enjoyed your poem this evening!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/21/2022 8:30:00 AM
thanks much Suzan
Date: 6/6/2015 5:08:00 AM
Executed very well. Again, nice job.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/21/2022 8:30:00 AM
thank you Kori, my passion
Date: 3/29/2015 11:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem Richard..this poem completely depicts lifes' journey. And you did so in few words. "Well done."
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/23/2017 9:55:00 AM
thank you Nedra
Date: 9/12/2014 7:37:00 AM
You nailed it Richard....a perfect written description about life....great write :) Ana
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/23/2017 9:53:00 AM
thank you Ana
Date: 8/22/2014 11:18:00 AM
Ahhh. Grab life by the reigns and hold on... Especially if you're riding a Dragon... LOL... Always glad to read your poetry, my friend.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/11/2017 3:22:00 PM
Thanks,,,im back
Date: 8/6/2014 12:12:00 PM
Hi Rich...been a long time. Just read this piece and was blessed. Keep chopping at the bit my friend, pen those thoughts. One love. Joy wells
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/6/2014 12:17:00 PM
hi Joy,been back for a few months,you missed a few lol,I will keep chopping,oxox
Date: 7/30/2014 3:59:00 PM
Ohh, I just love this, Richard! I love "get connected to the energy" because we have to connect to the power source who is God or we will be drained, depleted. He gives us unlimited energy :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/6/2014 12:06:00 PM
thank you Toquyen,HE surely is
Date: 7/30/2014 12:05:00 PM
Inspirational write, I like best your 5th 6th 7th lines..:)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/6/2014 12:05:00 PM
thank you Olive
Date: 7/25/2014 3:29:00 PM
The journey is where it is at...Enjoy the ride for it goes too fast...cheers
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2014 6:30:00 AM
it surely does,ride and learn,thanks Tim
Date: 7/25/2014 3:16:00 PM
Quite a message here, Richard. Good advice to anyone growing up and that's all of us...growing daily at age 71. Packed, this piece is packed.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2014 6:28:00 AM
thank you R.A.P,never too old to learn

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