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As I close my eyes I pray I remembered you - the sun may not rise Edward J. Ebbs - January 10, 2016 Monoku choice: 17 Syllables Written for a Contest, Monoku or ONE LINE poem #1

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/20/2016 12:36:00 PM

Hi Ed, i always find these single line poetry forms pretty hard but i must persevere and keep trying them. The same thing i do each night Ed, Pray for my Love lest i wake not on the morrow. I am faving this one definitely. I like the thought...Vlad.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:12:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Ed.

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 2:14:00 AM

Congratulations on this awesome monoku! Thought provoking....

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:25:00 AM

EDWARDS, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

James Inman

Date: 1/25/2016 5:34:00 AM

Very nice, deep write, Edward.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 8:49:00 PM

Edwards, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2016 8:17:00 PM

very nicely done, Edward. I enjoyed seeing this monoku. And I'm glad you liked my color poem.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/19/2016 8:58:00 AM

Thanks for choosing my poem for your contest. I enjoyed your monoku, good luck in the contest.

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2016 2:02:00 AM

Edward, true, we never know when our end will be, never, wonderful monoku, a winner to me, and I would like to thank you so much for my placement in your Anacreontic Verse contest, I am honored ~

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/11/2016 1:27:00 AM

Well done, dear friend! The sun will rise, we simply wouldn't see it with our earthly eyes!

Tim Smith

Date: 1/10/2016 8:59:00 PM

I like this one Ed. We never know if we will awaken from our sleep.