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Just Give me a Chance

Close your eyes
wait for my soft touch,
that full moon,
I'll teach it
how to caress inch by inch,
just give me a chance!


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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:43:00 AM
    I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Kash. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:35:00 AM
    KASH,, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 2:09:00 PM
    ((()))!!!Congrats on your winnind work..Sara

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    Date: 8/29/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Should be winning..Sorry about that ..Sara
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 6:26:00 AM
    A beautifully seductive poem, so romantic. Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:10:00 PM
    A wonderful romantic write, Kash! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:35:00 AM
    oh I am flying on luv Kash .. a glorious ride of lines.. thankxx luv I changed my fifth verse..oh.. u r a life saver..

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:25:00 PM
    kash, when in doubt, I use 5/7/5 because some of the judges are old fashioned that way and it just feels safe to do it unless told otherwise in their rules!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:42:00 PM
    Very romantic work that you have penned in this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:12:00 PM
    What a special poem my friend! You have written such a delightful write, I love it! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:51:00 PM
    soft smile..I bet you get lots of chances, would you double check my syllable count on Dark Descends? please with sugar![3,6,9,12,12,9,6,3] Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:05:00 PM
    WOW Kash. Excellent one. it seems to be the syllable count of the shadorma one? I saw what Robert P wrote about you and Carrie That was so nice.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 12:36:00 PM
    awww, hope you melt her heart, my friend

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 11:05:00 AM
    yowzie, kashi... this flows like honey on the mouth... terrrific shardoma with winning marks.. really had computer problems, arrfh!... miss ya and sweet huggs!..:)