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Just Give Me a Chance

Close your eyes wait for my soft touch, that full moon, I'll teach it how to caress inch by inch, just give me a chance! ***********************

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 5:43:00 AM

I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Kash. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:35:00 AM

KASH,, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2012 2:09:00 PM

((()))!!!Congrats on your winnind work..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2012 2:10:00 PM

Should be winning..Sorry about that ..Sara

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2012 6:26:00 AM

A beautifully seductive poem, so romantic. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 8:10:00 PM

A wonderful romantic write, Kash! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/25/2012 10:35:00 AM

oh I am flying on luv Kash .. a glorious ride of lines.. thankxx luv I changed my fifth verse..oh.. u r a life saver..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 9:25:00 PM

kash, when in doubt, I use 5/7/5 because some of the judges are old fashioned that way and it just feels safe to do it unless told otherwise in their rules!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2012 6:42:00 PM

Very romantic work that you have penned in this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/22/2012 6:12:00 PM

What a special poem my friend! You have written such a delightful write, I love it! Great Work!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/22/2012 5:51:00 PM

soft smile..I bet you get lots of chances, would you double check my syllable count on Dark Descends? please with sugar![3,6,9,12,12,9,6,3] Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 5:05:00 PM

WOW Kash. Excellent one. it seems to be the syllable count of the shadorma one? I saw what Robert P wrote about you and Carrie That was so nice.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2012 12:36:00 PM

awww, hope you melt her heart, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2012 11:05:00 AM

yowzie, kashi... this flows like honey on the mouth... terrrific shardoma with winning marks.. really had computer problems, arrfh!... miss ya and sweet huggs!..:)