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Just Can'T Fix

The heart something duct tape just can not fix Spirit but there is One I Hope it clicks ' Broken without repair to a friend mine like the roll I would give loves at all-times ' Jesus more than brothers He in the cliques Master repairer of contrite's transfixed ' My friend a place duct tape won't stick holds kind The One sets us free and a Friend who binds - by John Beam

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Date: 3/24/2012 4:58:00 AM
You have this one correct..That duct tape comes in handy for many temporary repair but it can't do the heart(spirit) of man any good..My mother always said that soap would clean anything but the soul..Thanks for stopping by..Soup Mail..Sara
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John Beam
Date: 3/24/2012 2:04:00 PM
two things showing where their works lacked perfection
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John Beam
Date: 3/24/2012 1:22:00 PM
Act 14:22 CONFIRMING the souls of the disciples, [and] exhorting them to continue in the faith, and that we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of GodRev 14:13 And I heard a voice from heaven saying unto me, Write, Blessed [are] the DEAD which DIE in the Lord from henceforth: Yea, saith the Spirit, that THEY may rest from their labours; and their WORKS do follow them.
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John Beam
Date: 3/24/2012 12:58:00 PM
the Point being, if they where spiritually dead How could the watch and strengthen any one else if where as you say the would be commanded to repent and seek life not to watch and strengthen those that are ready to die
Date: 3/17/2012 2:04:00 PM
Sorry your entry for my contest is not in couplet form. The theme is good but you need to check the contest page for rules and form. Thank you Michael
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John Beam
Date: 3/18/2012 5:37:00 PM
I hope this better thanks
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John Beam
Date: 3/17/2012 5:39:00 PM
alright thanks

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