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Just Before My Lights Went Out

I held her naked in exhausted arms Just before my lights went out After passionately sampling her woman’s charms Just before my lights went out The beautiful wife of my best friend A sin without a doubt Who I saw approaching with a baseball bat Just before my lights went out

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Date: 11/2/2012 9:16:00 PM
Good poem, but I just know that this can not be true. It's just a poem right. I hope your lights came back on. Take care just in case. Lucilla
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Joe Flach
Date: 11/3/2012 7:27:00 AM
Lucilla, just like most of my poems, a lot of which I write in 1st person, this is pure fiction and the result of a warped mind. I am not sure how brigt my lights shine, but they have always stayed on.
Date: 11/2/2012 10:25:00 AM
Great Rhyme, Joe! Feel sorry for your best friend, but I guess he got his revenge! ;) I enjoyed reading this humorous poem!
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