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All you young'uns now listen to me Been around for almost eight decades Feel just as good as I did in my forties Have had all the latest upgrades Living proof you don't need to feel old It's simply how you're feeling upstairs If things are really clicking along smoothly Downtimes become quite rare It's not a great truth I've just discovered It's a matter of common sense A positive attitude is an absolute must To retain your youthful presence So now you finally know the secret of life Thank me with bundles of money It's just another service I kindly offer Making your day more sunny © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 10/20/2013 8:40:00 AM
Nice poem Jack, and in it lies the truth.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2013 8:45:00 AM
Keep smiling Gwen... it's good for the soul! Thanks once more... having trouble keeping up! Not complaining though!!! LOL xox
Date: 10/18/2013 11:01:00 PM
Jack it's great to read "being positive is the key to stay young". To be very frank my father-in-law is a great example for this. This is a great service from you to the youth.believe me to see such living examples like you worth billions and trillions. great my friend great. (:v Jenish.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/19/2013 5:58:00 AM
WOW What sweet words! I thank you from the bottom of my heart... SMILE! It feels SO good! Love and happy thoughts xoxoxox
Date: 10/18/2013 9:21:00 AM
Troll Lake keeps me young and a light with ideas... Mike is going to have to move jobs so we sat down and wrote a Ha! Ha! about 'Job Interviews'! But contrary to the poem... we haven't become millionaires... But it gave a great ending... No Dragon in this one tho... So my roses may suffer a little... And we may have to take an extra run to the Lake with barbecue sauce in hand... But those are just for exercise... the Drama is just for fun... LOL... RIGHT!... or so I keep telling myself... LOL
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Date: 10/18/2013 10:23:00 AM
I wish your man Mike all the best and of course you and your many friends! Think positive... hugs and much love xoxoxx

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