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"Looking back at the Earth, I can't really describe how beautiful it is from 300 miles up. Looking down, you can tell it's a planet. The sky is black. There's just a thin blue ribbon, what we see as blue sky on Earth. You realize how small it is and how fragile the planet is."- Astronaut Mike Good
Just A Thin Blue Ribbon... With this book, I sit… attempting to comprehend the scope and wonder exposed upon these printed pages... overwhelming pictures of our universe and space. Where are you Earth? I see our galaxy, our Milky Way, full color on this wondrous page, and I almost miss that tiny speck… that speck, our world, bound by just a thin blue ribbon... our magnificent, earthly sky. Yet there you are, with cars and people bustling here and there… bridges, trains, skyscrapers, jets… blue oceans with majestic ships… the wonders of our age… you great, important, busy, busy world. Where are you Earth amid this cloud of dust? I find you on this page with straining eye so lost among the stars, the planets, moons. My home…my Earth… a tiny speck… bound by just a thin blue ribbon against the black of space A microscopic grain… Caught up in cosmic winds with all the rest. Sandra M. Haight ~4th Place~ Contest: Second Chance - 4 Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 06/03/2016 ~NA~ Contest: Just A Thin Blue Ribbon Sponsor: Rita A. Simmonds Contest Judged: 05/15/2016

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Date: 6/4/2016 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest placement....
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Date: 6/4/2016 6:42:00 PM
Great write - picturesque! Excellent placement in the contest! -Jesse
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/4/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Jesse, for your nice comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 6/3/2016 11:19:00 PM
Great write Sandra worthy of s second chance....Seren
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/4/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Seren. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/4/2016 10:30:00 PM
Beautifully done my lovely friend. (7). Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/5/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, BL. Sandra
Date: 5/4/2016 4:12:00 PM
NICELY done, Sandra. I was inspired by that quote and picture too (just have not posted it yet) Good luck. I think it's a premiere contest, right? Those are kinda scary!! So much competition for so few places!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/5/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Yes, a premiere contest. Thank you for your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/4/2016 2:29:00 AM
Excellent. A lovely poem with vivid imagery. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/5/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi, for your visit and uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 5/3/2016 7:46:00 PM
I read this seeing every thing you'd written in this piece! The first line of the last stanza grabs me..."My home...my Earth!" The best to you in this contest Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2016 7:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Walter, for your uplifting comment. I really appreciate your feedback and support. Sandra

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