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Just a look

A smile that proves I’m good but a frown so bad,
No backpack on my shoulder but my heart to drag,
Long gone from the scene of the crime without a tag,
Over seen as dangerous just because my Levi jean’s sag,
Carrying the sorrows in my mind with a heavy duty plastic bag,
No surrender against the world so throw away the white flag,
Whipping the sweat off my forehead with a torn rag,
No gossip but little birdies do brag.

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  1. Date: 12/1/2011 1:53:00 PM
    Good one! Do read mine too :)

    Serpas Avatar Eric Serpas
    Date: 12/3/2011 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank yah, aha. N iWill