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(Kyrielle) Just look around you and see how Nature every day to God bow Angeles then gather just singing All in Heaven is rejoicing. Then just see the most peaceful light When the sun rises high at dawn bright In all its beauty sky shining All in Heaven is rejoicing. God then just blesses inside my soul And makes me feel when in trouble whole He sets all my heart on fire dancing All in Heaven is rejoicing. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 aka ladylove copyright@2014 December,05,2014

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Perry Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2014 4:36:00 AM

Very nice, Dorian. Also good to see a kyrielle. So few try this lovely form.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/8/2014 10:16:00 AM

Hello Perry! Thank you so kindly for dropping by and for your very wonderful feedback ! Happy to know you like my Kyrielle ! Much apprecited! Wish you a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.