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Judgement Day

I can’t stand to look you in the face Yes my Lord, I am a disgrace. I’ve lived my life in sin And I’m afraid to say this is the end. For today is “Judgement Day” And I’m most definitely not shouting hip hip hurray! Yes, I am a sinner, a liar, and a thief But absolutely no one has ever knocked my belief. I hope this is enough to get me through the gate But only he, my Lord and savior, can decide my fate. Yes, today is “Judgement Day” and I’m looking around this place, Everyone has the same terrified look on their face. I can only assume where I’m going and it’s not where I’m hoping. I know my past, so I’m getting ready for this hot flash. Sooner or later it’s me. I’m next in line. I shake; I shiver, even let out a little tiny quiver. Here I am getting judged on this day. Man, oh man What a price I’m about to pay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/15/2016 2:09:00 PM
Kacy, you rhymed the heck out of a human's greatest fear, the unknown...if you are a true believer in your chosen faith you have no worries, your Lord has already died for your sins!!!Sweet 7 I enjoyed your piece:) peace & love, jill...thanx 4 reading me and your awesome comment!!!!
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Kacy Brandon
Date: 7/30/2016 4:43:00 AM
Thanks!!! :)
Date: 6/23/2016 10:31:00 PM
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