Joyously We Be - a Collab With James Fraser

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I write on my own and so glad each time I received some comments either good or bad.. I always try to take criticisms a way to improve myself..

I am humbled each time I co-write with someone. It is both fun and helpful.. :) Fun as two heads can work things out and sure each one I believe possess unique identical way of writing but to make this difference come as if only one made it is a wow.. :)! I feel glad to write some poems with some soupers here: P. A. Callus being the first with "LOVER AND FRIEND", Malok Yaseen with " THE PURSUING SELF" and the most I write with is James Fraser, this is one of those..... :) Each poets I mentioned above are I can say among the best here on their own unique way of writing.. :)

I thank you for writing with me.... :)

JOYOUSLY, WE BE Pillows, pillows, rainbow pillows everywhere amidst this sea of pillows, two in lounging share-- capering aplenty, teasing, teasing thee. Fun-filled laughter bubbles up, joyously, we be. Fluffy, fluffy cotton knobs, wrap next to 'bods Tuck so right in a hug, keep tight in the warmth. Playing hard to get in merry-go-round zest. Rock and roll, it drew smiles; rise and fall release sighs... Teaser! Teaser, tease her! blushing freedom pairs! Giddy music gentle lapping sound like chorale. Closer, we become, touches twinkling like stars in catch one's breath pause, our eyes interlace, comes we! Pleaser! Pleaser, please him round the clock so light! Do cuddle him lovingly and sing her a song, between some brushes, he shall blow hushes as when night and day strums, allow yin and yang rhumb. © J. A. Fraser and O. E. Guillermo Written November 17, 2014 .

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/19/2014 1:47:00 PM

There is so much fun and joy flowing through this co-write; well done to both of you. I can hear teasing, laughter and giggling. Very pleasant to read! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2014 4:11:00 PM

hahaha well that must be... :) cause that's what we want the reader to feel. pillow fights are a wow sometimes.. :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/19/2014 10:15:00 AM

Thanks Mr. James.. :) i have rnjoyed thid write..:)

James Fraser
Date: 11/19/2014 1:21:00 PM

Your welcome Olive, it was such a buzz writing this theme. Loved what we crafted here and so looking forward to the next one. Some head scratching now for another different theme, James :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2014 8:29:00 AM

- I can feel the joy you two have together by writing this wonderful poem :) - Lovely poem, enjoy reading Olive and James! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2014 4:10:00 PM

thnks much Anne Lise.. :)