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THE tears that flowed, flowed like a babbling river. Running, flowing, like a gentle current, tugging at the heart string. A unfathomable joy, busting, making each tear ,drift, drop, like a cascading waterfall. Clear, crystalline drop, drop, drop. The downward flow, spiraled, To the sleeve down below. No more joy could hold the heart as I gazed upon the tiny face. As a new life appeared, the heart consumed,amidst The tears running drop, drop, drop until the flow finally stopped.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2011 6:32:00 PM
i love it , you have an amazing gift
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:30:00 AM
did you blog for birthdays or something? I just saw your earlier message from the day. WEll, I am Sept. 5. Remember my lucky number? Also for the year 55. So remind me when YOURS is!
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:36:00 AM
An expressive write Phyllis, enjoyed by me tonight.. love wilma
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:54:00 PM
i go gooey over this poetic spell, phylls.. soo marvelous and beautifully pained! :) huggs, nette...
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:28:00 PM
Very expressive and creative work that you have penned..Sara
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:01:00 PM
a beautiful and touching piece of poetry. thank you for reading The Old Train Depot and for your comment.
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Date: 4/6/2011 2:28:00 PM
How wonderful, you made it into tears of joy. I think very few did that. And I love the baby as the focus of this one, Phyllis. I hope this does well in the contest!
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Date: 4/6/2011 12:17:00 AM
Tears of Joy - Wonderful writing, Phyllis. Lainie
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Date: 4/4/2011 2:32:00 PM
Imagery, at its' best. I like it!
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Phyllis. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:29:00 AM
Enjoyed this so much..the format is interesting as well.. Good work. BG
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:58:00 AM
A wonderful free verse dear poet ! There are other forms which this write could fall under, yet, this is the safest ! ;) Have a fantastic week Phyllis ! Much love, james.................P.S.....I have a; Loving Giving, caring, funny sister named, Phyllis ;)
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:27:00 AM
The tears that come when giving birth must indeed be born of joy. A beautiful, touching poem, Phyllis. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:26:00 AM
The tears that come when giving birth must indeed be born of joy. A beautiful, touching poem, Phyllis. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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