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Journey Through Coma

Life and death on a video game their punching buttons not responsive to hospital gadgets and electromagnetic technologies. Consciousness is pinned to extinctions wall and disappearance in court advocating for a permanent roommate. Every stepping win shows the direction to which this soul is destined. Existence is in a pitiful mood with just its left hand held. The firmness of such hold, serving as a marker to its needed victory or unfortunate loss. One move and another, death leads but the big win finally comes and the abstract world of the spirits hit itself and weep in anguish as the soul marries the body to activate a living being once again.

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Date: 1/1/2016 11:17:00 AM
Funom,, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so so very much SKAT A
Date: 12/28/2015 12:06:00 PM
Im now crying. :'(
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:54:00 AM
hahahaha... Thank you so so very much Selfa
Date: 12/26/2015 7:56:00 PM
"Every stepping win shows the direction to which this soul is destined" very true, the winning affect of the conceptual reason of wanting a certain result. Gets us thinking about whats in store for our soul. Great piece of writing. Quincy Mac
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Mac
Date: 12/25/2015 10:26:00 PM
Hi Funom, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda... I wish you a prosperous year and more years of fulfillment and peace. Sorry for reading this late, nonetheless, the year is still fresh and good tidings are still flying in the air. Thank you so much once again.
Date: 12/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
a very interesting write!! You write so descriptively.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Andrea
Date: 12/25/2015 7:22:00 AM
This is an emotive write....just thinking about the title, it gives all the pains..great piece!
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Njeri
Date: 12/24/2015 6:06:00 PM
An ethereal journey, from oblivion to conciseness at the edge of sanity. Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Emile
Date: 12/24/2015 3:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this deep Imagism, Funom. Blessing sir
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Eve
Date: 12/24/2015 11:24:00 AM
Very deeply pained. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Devnath
Date: 12/24/2015 10:38:00 AM
i love it funom
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Francis Osho
Date: 12/24/2015 9:01:00 AM
Very thought-provoking, profound Janice
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so so very much Janice

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