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Journal - the Last Few - Ii

JOURNAL II – The Last Few The old, empty house just next door. They say it’s gutted, pipes and all. It’s boarded-up now sad ghostly, The metamorphosis over a long period Walking by one day I wonder at the wealth of Roses by the front sidewalk Life goes on And I catch at the realization Such a wealth of flowers, Such beauty fronting the ugly old place I smooth a petal with one finger, deep in thought Oh yes, the last few will be searching

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/2/2014 5:53:00 PM
Wow!! Such deep thoughts. Isn't it tru thou...Life goes on long after we are gone. Great writing my friend. bfn Lainie
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Date: 6/30/2014 3:09:00 PM
wow, so profound . I just love the roses used for imagery in contrast to the old house. WE have a vacant house next to us. It's been a few years now.It just won't sell and it's a nice house but unattended. however. their roses keep blooming, even better than mine!!!
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