Joining In the Christmas Spirit

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Joining In the Christmas Spirit Christmas songs of joy and laughter to be heard Heard inside people’s loving warm homes of Joy Joy to join the holiday spirit, but I'm out here tired Here tired of seeing the snow fall and being alone Being alone outside in crystalline white snow Snow path of wet snow flakes from the rising sun rays Rays melting the deep white snow that glimmers Glimmers of diamonds, silver tinsel, and green wreaths Wreaths I wear decorated with ribbons and lights Lights aglow, tree bought with perched red robins Robins gather on branches flew me inside Inside where children at play and I can be Be a Snowman Christmas tree in a rightful place Place to see everyone uplifting cheerful warm smiles Smiles of joy when wishful gifts they open Open with holiday spirit on Christmas day 12/1/2015 Chain Verse 1 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ebbs

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2016 12:14:00 AM

Eve, Nice win... ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 1/2/2016 1:09:00 AM

EVE, Congratulations on your "Chain Verse 1 WIN". SKAT

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/1/2016 9:55:00 PM

Eve, thank you for participating, good job and congrats on your third place!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2016 11:17:00 PM

Thank you so I much, Edward!!!! You made my New Year's :-) Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2015 6:17:00 PM

very nicely done, Eve. Wow!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2015 7:18:00 PM

Wow!!! coming from you is an honor thank you! For that you get a great big Hug (.)

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/2/2015 10:22:00 AM

why do they try so hard to commercialize....the Faith you can find within my eyes....Christ Is Deeply Rooted Within my Soul....but they value Christmas with the number of gifts sold....Jesus Must Be The Reason For All The Joyful Songs....why do we just give in December when Christmas Is The Season That Is Eternally Long....just my thoughts about it ms eve but you did an amazing job....we just have to keep it going all year....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Eric, you are right it is something that I try very hard to do

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2015 6:10:00 PM

you've done a grand job Eve - I can't get to grips with this form yet - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, I'm not sure if I did it right. But you always do good job.