Get Your Premium Membership

Joan of Arc

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Paul Callus.


The Medieval era was filled with wars and strife between the French and English at cost of limb and life. The French became disheartened; their victories were rare, a humbling situation which was too hard to bear. A peasant girl heard voices and visions she could see. A maid who had a mission, young Joan from Domrémy. The King and other nobles put all their faith in her. This maid of calm composure had dreams which they could share. Entrusted with an army she rode the horse she had with banner and sword wielding, in shining armour clad. The English looked in wonder; there were bewildered scenes as Joan and soldiers entered the city of Orleans. With rousing words and courage her men to battle led. The English were defeated; in disarray they fled. More victories then followed, her fame spread far and wide, but when the voices ended she lost the gift to guide. In battle she was captured, for sorcery was tried. Condemned to death by burning to wooden stake was tied. The hungry flames devoured the maid’s unblemished skin. She called the name of Jesus; found strength from deep within. She died. It was all over this heroine’s ordeal. She was proclaimed not guilty years later, on appeal. A martyr, now respected, who paid a costly price. A victim of politics; a saint in people’s eyes. ------------------------------------- Contest: Joan of Arc Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst *Joan of Arc admitted that she never used her sword to kill anyone. To her, strategy was more important than the sword.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/31/2015 1:45:00 AM
Hi Paul, this is a wonderful Quatrain about Joan! I am truly surprised that it was not on the winners list. In my books, it is definitely a winner and a 7! Have a great weekend, my friend! Pandita
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 10/31/2015 11:24:00 AM
I am so pleased that you like this poem, Pandita! Thank you for reading, and for the high rating. May you have a lovely weekend, too!:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/7/2015 7:58:00 PM
Beautiful
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 10/8/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Joan! Regards // paul
Date: 10/6/2015 10:26:00 PM
I did not notice the footnote the first time I read this great poem. That is very interesting. I'm glad I came back and noticed it ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thank you CayCay for revisiting:) A second read is always appreciated. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/3/2015 1:58:00 AM
What Silent One said - An excellent historic write. Very well done and a pleasure to read ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 10/5/2015 4:29:00 PM
I am so glad that you found this to your liking, CayCay. Thank you for stopping by. ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 9/30/2015 8:26:00 PM
Paul my favorite of all the ones I've read on Joan of Arc. This is definitely a winner. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 10/2/2015 4:42:00 AM
You are very generous, Michael...and I appreciate it, thank you. All the best. // paul
Date: 9/30/2015 1:17:00 AM
I have always loved reading and watching documentries and movies about this young woman. This is going into my fave's Paul! Sure to be a top winner. I didnt ha e enough time to write one. #7 soup mail
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 10/2/2015 4:07:00 AM
Thank you Connie, both for these comments, the fav and the soup mail. Your support and encouragement are truly appreciated. I can relate to time management...not enough hours in a day! Have a lovely day:) // paul
Date: 9/29/2015 3:48:00 PM
Very informative, Paul. I would have probably done mine very similar to this if I had tried the contest. It just did not inspire me but i think YOU got it exactly how Isaiah wanted it!
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2015 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I don't usually write this long, but I found it hard to keep it short! Now awaiting judgment...:) // paul
Date: 9/29/2015 12:01:00 PM
I'v learned a lot about St. Joan of Arc in your excellent tribute my dear friend, Paul. A super 7 from me. May I fave this if you don't mind? Thank you so much! May I have also this chance to thank you for your lovely visit on my poem. God bless! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2015 12:20:00 PM
I am so pleased with your lovely and warm visit, Leonora:) Thank you for reading and commenting favourably, and even more for the high rating and fav. Your support and encouragement are very much appreciated. Blessings and hugs ~ paul
Date: 9/29/2015 7:18:00 AM
Hi Paul. What a great tale of Divine Destiney and the courage of the one who had been called to battle. Very well written with a fantastic flow that made it so easy to read. I truly did enjoy this one, my friend. A 7 and a favorite..... Robert.
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2015 10:01:00 AM
Hi Robert! Pleased to see you back in action! I am glad that you enjoyed this latest poem of mine, and thank you for the lovely feedback + the high rating & fav. ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 9/28/2015 6:29:00 PM
An amazing story about bravery and faith , a lady to admire She is.
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Charm. I believe that a great injustice was made in her regards; fortunately it was partly remedied later on. ~ All the best. // paul [ps: read a touching article by David's father on his anniv.]
Date: 9/28/2015 5:38:00 PM
great story telling! The only glitch for me is the rhyming of price with eyes. I think if you rework that one stanza you will have an even more excellent piece.
Login to Reply
Jennings Avatar
Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 10:28:00 PM
Could it just be an accent issue? I've noticed that happens on PS ... CayCay
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for reading and advising, Richard. This is what part of commenting is all about:) Now mulling your suggestion. ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 9/28/2015 2:05:00 PM
The story flowed from your pen... Beautifully executed piece. I wish you the best in the contest.
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/28/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thank you for the generous comments and wishes, Carol:) Hope you and dragon are keeping well. Take care. // paul
Date: 9/27/2015 5:11:00 PM
Wow, Paul. This is such a flowing write. I like the ease with which I read the story. 7. Thanks, I really enjoyed it. hugs!
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/28/2015 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Kim; I'm pleased that you mention the flow of the poem....means that my humble fussy efforts re meter and rhyme have not been in vain:) ~ Have a lovely day! Hugs // paul
Date: 9/27/2015 2:34:00 PM
Back AGAIN , forgot the 7.. lol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2015 2:33:00 PM
Love this poem and its flow is superb my friend. Good luck in that contest.
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/27/2015 2:43:00 PM
Many thanks Robert; glad you enjoyed. Also txs for coming back with the high rating:) // paul
Date: 9/27/2015 8:35:00 AM
- This was interesting and skillfully written, Paul ! - Good luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/27/2015 11:39:00 AM
Glad you found this poem to your liking, Anne Lise:) Thank you for reading and for the positive comments. ~ Hugs // paul
Date: 9/26/2015 2:47:00 PM
Really well written Paul, A good all round poem in good rhyme too!! Enjoyed it!!! Good Luck Kevin
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/27/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thank you for the encouraging feedback, Kevin. Enjoyed your poem on this same topic! ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 9/26/2015 12:19:00 PM
great tribute Paul good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/27/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I wrote this at past 2am and was too tired to post it then! When I did I just beat the closing date! Hugs // paul
Date: 9/26/2015 11:00:00 AM
Great historical work n perfect rhyming Paul! Gl in contest!
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/26/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thank you, Upma. Rhyme is one of my favourite forms. ~ Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 9/26/2015 10:24:00 AM
I really enjoyed this read. Standing on a stage, this would be History done in Oral Form! Best wishes, Rainbow.
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/26/2015 11:39:00 AM
Pleased that you enjoyed this write, Rainbow! Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards // paul
Date: 9/26/2015 10:23:00 AM
Just coming back with the 7:-)Alexis
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 9/26/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Alexis:) I wrote this poem late last night; have not been able to go online much these past few days. ~ Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 9/26/2015 10:20:00 AM
Paul, I enjoyed your historical tribute to Joan of Arc.Great job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs